Cleanliness And Order

The irony here cracks me up

Anyway, if anyone reads these Artists Descriptions, this is from a travel to an abandoned factory in Ypsilanti Michigan. You can see some info here in my journal.

I said that I would work on these 'tomorrow', but I just had to take a crack at some of them before I went to bed This image was rather ironic, and it looked fairly good, so I worked on it a bit.

Now, this is an HDR image, meaning that it's made up of photos from different exposures. But I try to make my HDR images look like actual photos, so this is what this is. This is 7 different exposures, and I did that to make sure that the outside areas were properly exposed.

Anyway, I'm sort of liking this new exploration of abandoned stuff, so I'd appreciate any advise or comments about what I can improve here

There's a few areas where the tone/contrast isn't exactly right for me, or looking natural, but I think it looks fairly decent.